Reviews for Take My Breath
Morcirith chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
i suggest turning the knife somewhere other than on you.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
People usually associate the saying, 'take my breath away,' with happy thoughts - it's interesting because this poem makes one look at that expression in a new light.

EB
Greenwords05 chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
wow.. i dont think ill ever be able to hear take my breath away in the same way ever again. wow..
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Aww..very sad. This like serisouly almsot made me cry, but maybe thats just because I'm really pissed off and when I'm mad I like cry. But anywho this is good.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
i love this. and i can relate. beautiful work. i love the last two lines. beautiful.