Reviews for Two Screwed Up People
Morcirith chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
surprising ending. i wonder if this was supposed to be funny (i thought so). what's with the random capitalization? what do those terms represent?
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
It's ironic how the little afterthoughts are telling the exact opposite of what the speaker is saying. Maybe we all have that little voice in our heads that is telling the truth that we would not admit.

xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Woah. Very good. I love the parantheses and how they contridicted what you had just said. I also love the pain and the anger. Great job!