Reviews for Formidable Loss
Candice chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
I definitely like how you worked the whole poem into its own image (cliff). As another review mentioned, the last word was a great way to end the entire thing.
classic violet chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
I love that last word. It makes the poem so much more complete. Thank you for your review!
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
You wrote that in 10 mins.? That is pretty good for that amount of time!