Reviews for Dreams Adjurned
SilverRain1011 chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Very deep, I love the line "frigid skies spit out darkness". I enjoy all of your haikus! Keep up the good work!
an-angel-in-hell chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
ooh... i like it. Good, deep. Dark. Awesome, basically.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Interesting haiku. Very vivid. Well done.
Samara-chan chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
I really, really liked this. A melancholy and powerful poem. I love "frigid skies spit out darkness." Beautiful metaphor.
multiples of six chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Wow.. very creepy. Definitely seems to be about war, to me at least. Nicely written!
ygg chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Yes I LOVE the second line. Very ominous, terrifying even. Excellent work!

PS. Thank you for your many reviews :)
Disturbing Enigma chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
I loved the term "frigid skies spit out darkness." Great personification. Awesome job!