Once again I am back reading this story in 2021. To me, it’s one of my favorite works. I still love the style, plot, and characters more than ever. Coming back to it, and them, is like visiting an old friend, and it’s always warm and welcoming. Asenka, wherever you are now, thank you again for this wonderful story :)

Beautifull...
Thank you for sharing

Man thanks for this enemies-to-lovers story. I enjoyed being part of Eddie and Max's life for one totally absorbing day! Keep writing, Asenka!

I want you to know I came back looking for this to reread it in 2017. I don't remember it very well - but know I loved it. Thank you for leaving it up ! And writing it of course.

My first review. Yeah. I know this is late but I love the sequencing of the story and the scripts and the how the characters are building up. Really loved this.

got boring fast

This story is just perfect, okay? I love the flow, style, plot, and especially the characters. If I'm ever half the writer you are, I'll consider myself very fortunate. Thank you for this!

The ending on this chapter makes me smile every time, ahh its so very sweet!

Didn't. Like the ending...

I have read a ton of fanfiction/stories and never before reviewed, but this chapter deserves it. The style was amazing and impossible to put down. You have a gift for writing many strive for, keep up the stunning work.

I Love Eddie he's awesome! :)

wow..one of the best story ever!

Aww. Love your last sentences

Fantastic chapter, best yet. Not just for the story itself, but the writing. Particularly liked quite a few sections, especially the small sentence describing the flow of the exiting audience as a return to reality. Beautiful writing.

Very interesting format. It could have been too messy, but instead you wove it beautifully, whipping up the pace, and running with the parallels in just the right moments.