Reviews for Act III
fredjohnl chapter 7 . 3/30
My first review. Yeah. I know this is late but I love the sequencing of the story and the scripts and the how the characters are building up. Really loved this.
Estrellagrace chapter 1 . 3/5
got boring fast
Guest chapter 23 . 2/16
This story is just perfect, okay? I love the flow, style, plot, and especially the characters. If I'm ever half the writer you are, I'll consider myself very fortunate. Thank you for this!
Lj chapter 19 . 2/3
The ending on this chapter makes me smile every time, ahh its so very sweet!
Onodera Kim san chapter 23 . 6/21/2016
Didn't. Like the ending...
Noah chapter 7 . 2/21/2016
I have read a ton of fanfiction/stories and never before reviewed, but this chapter deserves it. The style was amazing and impossible to put down. You have a gift for writing many strive for, keep up the stunning work.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2015
I Love Eddie he's awesome! :)
oliver barton chapter 23 . 5/1/2014 of the best story ever!
R. Ficst chapter 23 . 1/13/2014
Aww. Love your last sentences
R. Ficst chapter 19 . 1/13/2014
Fantastic chapter, best yet. Not just for the story itself, but the writing. Particularly liked quite a few sections, especially the small sentence describing the flow of the exiting audience as a return to reality. Beautiful writing.
R. Ficst chapter 7 . 1/13/2014
Very interesting format. It could have been too messy, but instead you wove it beautifully, whipping up the pace, and running with the parallels in just the right moments.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/27/2013
This chapter gave me goosebumps
I like how Eddie ended the fight
Fantasy's Mistress chapter 23 . 11/14/2012
I loved this story so much!
All of your characters were unique and I loved every minute of reading your story!
I hope that you'll continue to write such amazing stories!
randomreview chapter 23 . 9/3/2012
This is honestly the best story I have ever read, it's so perfect in everyway. Its not poorly written, it's not cliched, it's just absolutely wonderful. If this was a book on a shelf I would buy a copy for my entire country and there dog.
allancaldera chapter 21 . 7/28/2012
Really love this chapter good job I like the scene of new year.
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