Reviews for Act III
Aikida chapter 2 . 2/7/2006
Whoosh! So fast, love!first off, thanks so much for the pretty dedication.

I'm starting to get a picture of who these guys are and the tension between them is so freakin swet... I can taste it! Bwaha. I'm really into this story. The progress of it is really shaping up. Good job.
Aikida chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Haha. I much enjoyed the second part, eddie's part, than I did Kennedy, but I think that was because I don't much like the 'yay, we win' thing. Of course it fits here so I'm not in any way suggesting you change it. It was a nice start, good description and everthing and the flow was nice. The characters were introduced, though not much on character description appearence wise other than someone has brown hair (i don't know who). YAY! Okay, I'm reading the whole thing, love, so get the next part up soon.
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