|Reviews for the stain of scars|
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
keep your head up, girl (and i know that sounds so dry). Lovely poem as are all the other ones you've written.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
this is so unbelievably sad. . .
| hey maria chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
This seems like a very conversational piece, like a monologue. I think it'd be better as prose. It's not one of my favorites but I did like the end a lot: "i couldn’t see that until i had scars etched into skin,/a finger down my throat and tears denting a path in my cheeks."
| Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
This was a beautiful poem. Sad, but beautiful.