I'm at odds with the "tips" Caroline gave to Dana. Both of my parents are lawyers (one for malpractice and personal injury, one for business), and I've helped with mock trial competitions. The advice for witnesses in the courtroom is actually the complete opposite of what Caroline apparently said. Elaborating on "yes" and "no" questions is a must (only "yes" and "no" isn't strong enough in court), and the witness should turn to the jury when answering a question because if the jury doesn't get direct eye contact with them the witness is seen as less truthful.

Well aside from that (wow it took a complaint for me to review after all this time reading your works the past week that's sorta embarrassing aha) I've been enjoying your "Blood" series immensely. Finally a vampire story that has characters with legitimate character development and balanced out but still menacing with all their flaws vampires! Picturing Jamnis huddled up in a blanket being transported was very funny to imagine. (Minus him getting burnt as a result. Poor Jammy!). I've also really enjoyed the way you reveal information - not always straightforward, but hinting and hinting and then naturally revealing it. It's more interesting to read that way, and it results in less clutter of information :) So thank you very much for all your hard work, and I look forward to reading the third part of your series!

Loved it :)

Everything well written and characters developed quite well. Great read. :)

Kat's story isn't here? Now I'm wondering what happened! :(

I loved this story. It was amazing. You are suck a great writer. I can't wait to read the next one. :)

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I really love this series. It's really interesting, and the characters are really 3-D. She also doesn't just try to be tough for EVERYTHING. Just most of the things. That makes it good. Most heroines are just like: oh, I need to save everyone, but I know I can't, and I'm going to sacrifice myself. She doesn't seem as much like that.

Wow great story. i loved it )

you know how earlier on, you wrote that the curse dies with the caster... but since yuki is still alive, doesn't that mean that the curse is still in effect?

And isn't Yuki a Japanese GIRL's name? Hehe just like to point it out

Hello,

It's me again, even though you probably have no idea who I am. I liked this one as well, though I have to say, I know you can't change it now, but you always skip over the best parts, you create this steamy atmosphere, and then just skip right over it, it is kind of frustrating, but I guess not everyone is comfortable writing about these kind of things. *Sigh*

I love the story anyways, I didn't know what to expect next, it all changed at every turn. Keep up the good work.

Heyy,

I love this story. I love how you make Jamnis (although I don't really like his name. Where'd you get it?) act around her. He's so...sexy? Haha. Anyways, a well developped story so far! I seriously suggest you get this published. If you don't want to find an agent, edit it to perfection, then go to and self-publish it. Make sure you read the terms though coz there's things that I didn't expect, and when you're selling your book, you wanna know how the site works and gives you royalties and everything.

Thanks so much!

Ps. If you have got it published already, I'd love to buy it. :P

Blessed Be.

she seriously needs to grow up and soon. being immature and delusional and overreacting isn't good if she's being stalked and hunted. i wish she would just talk about what happened-EVERYTHING. and stop being a whiny selfish brat.

couldn't she have left? seriously after all that she stayed... really? damn this girl is dependent.