Reviews for Entwined
kvnchn chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
and I thought that I wrote short poems... lol, nice job, dude! weel... assuming you're a dude... but still, ya know? I'm pretty sure you are. I think that this was a really simple poem adn taht if it were elongated, it could make all the difference, ya know? Cuz this is actulaly semi-deeplike.. yup. I mean... it's got three elements... love, hate, and people and how they intertwine with out another and yup. awesome though!