Reviews for Death Becomes Her
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Once again, I congratulate you on your incredibly smooth flow. I like your style I lot. ;)

Keep writing!
violetsky23 chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
wow. you managed to rhyme non-cheesily! congrats, not too many do. i like how there is no clenching line saying "ok, it's done".
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
a sort of delicate simplicity that portends much anxiety & suppressed hysteria - that forced-calm feeling. gorgeous poem.
ii chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Beautiful. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Great job.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
There's almost a twist of irony in the ending. Good work
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Wow! I love the varied vocabulary and the rhythm. Incredible cool; it gave me this clear picture of a dead body. *shivers* Keep it up!
SerialXLain chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
Whoa. This. Is. Amazing. I love the rhythm of it, your rhyming is beautifully done-not forced or too much...I am jealous.

Love xox

Great poem