|Reviews for crushed to begin with|
| Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
... i keep reading, and i always wistfully sigh afterwards...
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
short and beautifully written
| addie pray chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Tastes like tequila. Yeah, hon, savor the burn. Lovely.
| beti213 chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
every word counts... perfectly balanced... LOVE IT!
| Erik Queen chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
short and sweet
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
I'm left puzzling over, "Petunias fervent in her soul". The rest I'm already dazzled by.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
"lipstick in the rim" sounds so haiku-ish ending, really. oh, and i loved it; "twirled too much love" is such a beautiful opening line. i swear, the whole thing could have killed me.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
i love it, the depth, the intensity and the feelings radiating from it, well done!
| re x invented chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
reminds me of absinthe for some reason.
then again a lot of things remind me of absinthe.
| astral boy chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
nice, i admire the way you create whole scenes in so few words. i really like the idea of 'love in a cup', as if it must be controlled, stirred to perfection. thanks again.
| Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
wow... WOW, i LOVE the way this is written, its so beautiful, short but saying everything, love it.
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
This I really enjoyed reading, love your stuff. Keep writing.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
a little piece but it's dynamite. every single word is beautiful- just pops off the page. gorgeous.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
petunias fervent in her soul- you leave me breathless sometimes, really.
reminds me of romeo and juliet
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
-speechless- it's poems like this that remind me why i love you.