Reviews for Twisted
Right or Ryn chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
you talent, and that's all I have to say.
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Twisted and disturbing... a good story.
Dusty 'BDOD' O'Hara chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Truthfuly...i was not planning on reviewing. for you see i do not review average or bad works. I believed this story to be average. but that was before it plagued me day and night for days on end. this story won't let me leave it be.

Jack And Jill went up the hillTo hold the hand of the otherJill fell with Jack, they broke their backsBecause Jack had lusted another

this is my twisted version. i made it up a while back, but i never thought i would use it. or even think about it ever again after i made it up, but i was wrong.

Kudos to you, BDOD chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Interesting...Good luck God bless!
Mimette chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
that was really good.i can't explain it in any other way.
H-Sea chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Wow, Chilling but this is such a good 'twist' on the nursury rhyme, you've clearly thought it all though.

I can't think of any constructive critism, It's really great! I love how you fitted in the nurusry rhyme at the end, made it make sense in your story, how Jack's crown was kinda metaphoric. It's really great!