Reviews for baby
a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
i absolutely love the way this is written, it's incredible. it makes me want her, too.
re x invented chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
b. e. a. u. t. i. f. u. l.

love it. the last four lines are the most powerful, in my opinion, they pull the whole thing together. the entire thing is so strong. never stop writing.

x3x3
stuck here waiting chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Beautiful imagery. Fantastic use of words and flow and everything is great. love it, really do. Much Love -
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
ooh you've used two of my favourite words! (kerosene and turpentine!)! Anyways, i really like this. i love the way you've worded it 'baby looks like...' 'baby smells like...' etc. it works really well. some beautiful imagery.