Reviews for Part of the Deal
pangur chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
I especially like this one alot.. The way you write is really original and I enjoy it. Keep up the good work, and maybe you could write something more upbeat sometime haha. PS.. Since I admire your writing so much, maybe you could check out a story I have going right now called Cadence. It would mean alot to me : ) But anyway, good luck with this and update soon : ) -Haley
button-nose chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
i love this...i totally relate to how you are feeling on this one. life can be so confusing sometimes! nicely written!

button nose x x
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Yeah, I like your writing style, it reminds me of an unfurnished but nicely painted house (interior) with lonely old oak beams interspersed sparsely on the ceilings, but with modern windows.

Damn, I think i'm insane, but at least I know what I mean.

It was daytime, if that's any help

Alan.
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Once again, a lovely write. Though now I wonder what would happen if you branched out to other forms. Just a thought.