That's pretty how the stone gets transformed.

Touching- truly. There's nothing more emotional than writing about a loved one's death... I can't speak from experience, but this poem really made me think. A true work of art. Beautiful. Keep it up.

Another lovely poem. "Blue like the sky she lovedThat watched us play"That really stuck with me.

wow...this was really good...if it's true, and you really have lost your mother, I am soo sorry...I know that it is probably a hard thing to deal with..but this poem was soo beautiful. I loved how you described the painting and all the colors...and how you continued to say..." i dipped my brush" really portrayed the picture well..i was easily able to picture in my mind someone there...painting a picture, calmly and peacefully..well done! i thought this was really good! *kw*! thnx fer the reivew too..made my day! *smiles*

~britney

wow. that was very...moving.

Wow, this is an absolutely beautiful poem. If this is a true story, then I'm truly sorry for your loss, but it's wonderful how you could create a poem so beautifully to let out your emotions and so others suffering the same thing can benefit as well. This was wonderfully written and so touching.

Btw, thank you so much for your review for "Vacant on Valentine's". I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who doesn't like that holiday.

This is really sweet. Shivery sort of poetry, if that makes any sense. I like it a lot.

I liked the short lines that you used in this poem, it emphasizes it every individual part of your message. I like the structure, how you dip your brush, paint blue, dip your brush again, the green...etc etc. I really got a good image of a person painting, it's beautiful.

its beautiful, i hope your mother didnt really die though, that would be horrible, i couldnt stand it without my mother.

lovely vivid descriptions.

I like this.. it's really pretty, and really sad. Makes me wish I could paint. *shrug*

I love this poem! I am adding it to my favorites. Great Job!