Reviews for Vice of Excess
Dire Calamity chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I get the image of an old white house with snow on the ground and wild flowers somehow growing with the first part. Then it seems to feel like the showing of some Mexican stuffies. And lastly, a time memorialized in stone for the last part?

If non of this is right, I shouldn't be reviewing your stuff, as I don't read the same things as you, and am horrible at following the meanings behind your writing-style.
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
i love love love this, the imagery and pacing and utter, utter confusion.
q is for quirks chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
you have a unique way of writing. it's very creative. this poem created some very strong images. good job.

and also, thanks for the review.
Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Very interesting. Great imagery & language.
Ajna chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
You are so talented, I'm jealous. I love your words.
Juni chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
One of the things I like about both this piece and "Elevator Tripping" is the way the words seem to flit across my mind leaving vague impressions, like a camera shutter clicking open and closed on different scenes. . . I don't exactly know what I got from this, but it makes me think, and I like that. It seemed almost frenzied, like a collage of images and words. Anyway, your style is very unique. . . interesting. : D
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
tha last bit was great! definitely a piece of brilliance herer!cheers -rabbit
classic violet chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
"Nova Scotia" Hehe, I live in Nova Scoia. This poem is gorgeous. It's so colourful & full of so much. It dazzled me with it's beauty.
frigg chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
I adore this piece, there is nothing more to say. Except that I'm favoriting this. My favorite part, if I had to pick a favorite is the first three lines of the first stanza.

Brava!

Junkd
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
profound... rather thought provoking good work

keep writing!
Little Couch chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Amazing descriptions. So in depth and just...aweing descriptive words. Seriously, this is probably my favorite out of all the ones you wrote so far. Good job, fo'shung. )
poo chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
amazing ;-;

Sam, and you KNOW it, bitch.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
M lovely descriptions, love the tone in this. Good job
hey maria chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Not one of my favorites, but still pretty damn good. "like the August nine o’clock horizon, like the/waterfalls dropping/through into you." You've got talent.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
love love the physical imagery aspect of it. anyway, beautiful wording. keep on going!
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