Reviews for Monster
Kaileekins chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Beautiful! Very good use of emotion and feeling. I can relate too...
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
very complex and interesting poem. sad, emotional but with an undertoe of hideen rage i think. nice job! :)
Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
wow. this is truly amazing! i really love it! just need to say something though... i dont believe in monsters because there is absolutely no good side to monsters. only evil and hate, and i believe there is a good side in everyone. -Black and White Dreams
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Very well written. Um, "Better Plans" is not actually my work; I posted it for a friend, as said in the summary.
Yagure chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
lovly poem, I look for ward to reading more of your work
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
What do you mean the girl is you? No one thinks your a monster! *slaps forehead* You're feeding the readers wrong information! Lol. Anyways, this is such a cute poem. _ Yes...cute (sad). And it expresses a lot of emotion. Each line brings up something tragic and emotional. Brilliant. Oh, yeah! And some parts rhymed! That's like so awesome!
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
I like it

'She called out for help as she started to turn wicked'

Good stuff man

Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
Wow, nicely written. Excellent work. Write on!