wow i think this is actually one of the best ones u've done kres. me likie! good poem and keep up the good work u're getting better at this u know -

-ac

Wow! Good job on a very emotional poem! It's terrific. I love the details and the cute rhyming! It's really tragic and depressing, but that was probably the point...well done!

Great work, excellent. Write on!

~Anna~