Reviews for Decay
breezy nostrils chapter 3 . 2/15/2006
wow so pretty...such a great collection.
breezy nostrils chapter 2 . 2/15/2006
loving the line "vacant eyes" nice job!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
loving the lines from this poem...it's so lovely. keep on going!
midnight skies are scarlet red chapter 2 . 2/13/2006
I'm a bit unsure about this...
chaos called creation chapter 3 . 2/12/2006
The last line to this one is oh so chilling. Their all beautiful actually. continue continue! :)
contrast and friction chapter 3 . 2/12/2006
Oh wow. These are all so beautiful. I especially love the 3rd one - you have created such an amazing image here. Even if you say they are incomplete, I think they're intense and perfect just the way they are.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 4 . 2/11/2006
Oh, I love it. It's all so cleverly done, not to mention beautiful.
AnAlterEgoName chapter 4 . 2/11/2006
ah, interesting and harsh.

red takes over until valentines day
AnAlterEgoName chapter 3 . 2/11/2006
an era of uncompleted . tadah.

lovely
AnAlterEgoName chapter 2 . 2/11/2006
a skinny little thing- harsh but not too so.

reminds me of watching kids who know they are cool but only self-proclaimed
AnAlterEgoName chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
aw. emeralds, it makes my day to hear of them. or to see them.

seems tearing
a lonely september chapter 4 . 2/11/2006
it's supposed to be 'your' i think but other than that. . . wow, i love the last two lines (even tho there's not too much to pick from lol).
a lonely september chapter 3 . 2/11/2006
this one was a pretty good one, i like the theme to it.
a lonely september chapter 2 . 2/11/2006
you may say that they are incomplete but they seem to be. adding anything else would ruin the effect.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
this may be short but it's one of the saddest and sweetly written things i've ever read.