|Reviews for I'm Falling|
| Destiny chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
You know, I like the last line. It ties everything together in the poem and you also used repetition with the "I'm falling..." line. repetition was used in a good way (sighs. i learn too much about poetry in ms. burke's class. but i suppose that's a good thing)
| poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Oh my gosh! This is such a cute poem. I absolutely love the last few lines. It tells it all. _ Very well written!