|Reviews for drum up the bass|
| ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
Yay for loud-ness! That's the only way to listen to music. I'll be deaf by the time I'm 30. Whatever. This is a great poem — short, but to the point. I like the image it created in my head. Loud rock concert, teenage girl wandering lost...you get the picture, I'm sure. Keep up the great writing, and thanks for the reviews! D
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Vividly unusual. Various scenes can be created by these words. That makes this a wonderful interprative piece.
| lozfairy chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
I don't know how but you've managed to convey an awful lot in those three lines. It reminds me of when my family used to argue and I sat in my room hoping they'd stop soon. I really like this. x
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Hello! I like this, however, it has so much more potential! Maybe add to it? Or perhaps turn it into a haiku? I like it though. Keep writing! _
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
this seems rather short and incomplete. but at the same time, it kind of works. anyway, nice job. love how you carefully chose the right words. keep on going!