Reviews for Lament of a Fallen Star
David Lovato chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
This is extremely 're definitely on my favorite authors list now.
Raw Garbage Namagomi chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
hi. Trippy poem. I'M HYPO! . okay. anyways, i like your poetry.

luv ya lotsJaye
Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Very beautiful and very interesting. "and I sit/with the moon on my lap/idly watching the stars." Great job.
Raven's Pen chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
nice piece, i really got a lot of emotion out of it

(reading your profile, btw...i share your views about being a Christian but not believing entirely in the Bible. rock on my friend)
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
I love it.

"Breathe deep upon the land"

That is a great line and it sticks out to me.

Rock Out!