Reviews for just wishing
alter-ego52 chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Wow I really like this and the mood that it creates.
lioness chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
beatiful, darling. just beautiful. lovely imagery. it was cool and sweet. i know how you feel. it all comes from (eating honey) i mean hating lioness
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
The imagery in this is astounding. Love the format.
Dragonzz chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
I like the format of this. It makes it MUCH more interesting to read. And I like the lines, "I’l rosesand eat sunshine," I love those lines!

dragonzz
Raven's Pen chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
in my personal opinion, poetry really needs to be about the words and the language. putting in bolds and italics and spaces and underlines just shows that you can't get a message across without using those. they really handicapp the person to someone who is reading it. I think it would be a hundred times better if you found a way to convey the message you want to without using all of the non-literary devices
hey maria chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
This format makes me just...ugh.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
"I’l rosesand eat sunshine" Love those liens.

Oh, such a sense of yearning in it, with a subtle undertone of hatred. Brilliant job!