Hm... I like that. Forever gone... Forever you. Very nice. Ah, who am I kidding? Excellent poem. I don't know why... but it made me think of the War Song by Culture Club. Lol. I should stop listening to music. *Glares at radio*

wow. this was really good. i don't know what to say honestly. its flow was superb. keep it up.

~shadow of something greater

it's not stupid... i like the 'forever gone, forever you' and i think it makes sense. hee hee good poem!

Oh, very nice. Nice tone of sadness, and a good use of it. Was this, perhaps, inspired by the Evanescence song of the same title?