Awesome poem. I like the repetition of 'Yeah, okay,". It's awesome!

~dragonzz~

wow. this was awesome. i liked the ending that you put on this, and just the style of the entire thing. very well written. keep it up.

~shadow of something greater

Very good. Is this an interpretation of debating with one's self over things?

Great work, well done. Excellent. Write on!

~Anna~

I love this poem and remember it oh so well. Good Work and keep it up!

_KRES