so is this person dying? Cause that is what i perceived from this poem! i like it, wonderful imagery!

Amazing! I LOVE the way it flows and rhymes. Marvelously brilliant

~dragonzz~

it was good

I enjoyed this poem, dark and morbid, just like the mood i'm in right now. You have a great flow to the words, and you give deep thought within imaging. great poem.

i like your style of writing poetry. this poem had such an eerie feel to it, and i liked it. you had very good word choice, and it flowed splendidly. i will add you to my author alerts now.

~shadow of something great

YAY! I really like this one. I don't think I read the old one before you redid it, but that doesn't matter, Anyway, Great Work!

-kres