|Reviews for Dust of a Snowflake|
| bloody-angel147 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
...i am blushing so much right now i think my cheeks are going to melt O/O...that. was. amazing. so wonderfully read, and you got the feelings down so well, just amazing. this is being favorited X3
| Lakada chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
The story is so compellingly and beautifully written, and especially for a yaoi one. I enjoyed every word. :) Very nice, keep up the great work!
| Finnyh chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Okay, well for one, beautifully written. So much description and wonderful (?_v?) imagery! Umm, well this was quite wierd for me to read. Ive never really considered reading something quite like this. I was just cruising by and I found it!
Well written. Just a few errors in placment of your punctutaion. There were a few instances where there REALLY should have been less commas! You should have used semi-colons or at least started a new sentence. It made it extremely difficult to follow and exhibited an element of being rushed. You might want to take a look.
Maybe you could have seperated some of your paragraphs a little. I got the feeling that prehaps this wasn't quite as planned out "lay-out-wise" as it prehaps could have been. In some intances it jumped around a little.
I'll give you praise for writing such a passionate yaoi fic though. You put a lot of thought into description, so well done! A great plot too.
It was a moving story but rather graphic! I don't normally read actual YAOI. I get a little embarassed...
Good luck with future writing!
Derek x x x
| ally bitch chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
wow that was so deep. but amazing, and beautifully writen.
| Smile101 chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Wow. That was incredible! I love Retsuhei and Christian. They are so cute. _ I'm so glad you're back. I'm excited!
| Kenyako Divination chapter 1 . 2/11/2006