Hey, I don't know what to say. This is gonna sound kinda crazy, but several years ago, I had a … Dream? Vision? I don't know what to call it. But whatever it was, I just want to say, that when I read this story, I got an uber case of dejavou. This story, believe it or not, matched my dream/vision/what have you, right down to the letter. Every single detail, every name of every person, all of it, exactly as it was in my … experiecce. I even lived the entire freaking thing as Kaida. It's so … I just don't have words for it. All I have to ask is where you came up with the idea for this story.? Was it a dream for you too? or was it just a rabid plot bunny that bit you in the ass and wouldn't let go? And you mentioned your boyfriend and that you hadn't seen himm in a while. Did that have something to do with a connection to this story?

If you have any ideas as to what is going on, I would really like to hear them.

Todd McSweeney

This chapter was pretty intense, your portrayal of her attempted escape was something out of the ordinary, and the words came to life. Because of this Im going to enjoy reading this story.

On another note; as you seem to have acknowledged there are spelling mistakes (but only a few) in the text, but what could be greater problems is that there are some grammar mistakes like the use of seen instead of saw and also some mixed up words like threw instead of through.

Since this story is old you have probably corrected these errors in your current writing, but if youre ever going to revise this story you know what to look for.

All in all I like this story and thats why I wrote a lengthy(-ish) review :)

Cute story :) Was really good.

I didn't like the love triangle, but then again, i never have haha :)

GOOD JOB was great :)

Cute, i like the plot :)

One thing, it's a Kimodo dragon, a kimono is a japanese type of robe, haha

:))))) Love the story thought, good job

That was a beautiful story! I loved your colourful characters.

I read your AN at the end of this chapter and you actually do have more errors. But they're grammer errors like you said 'fall' instead of 'fell'

whoa i loved it! very much ohh my gosh it was so awesome! it made me want to cry it was soo beautiful

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

i LOVE the story :)

haha. so are Vasska and Drake those two in the story?

Vasska is remembering his mate?

haha.. wait.. there wasnt a tree behind..

Aaw, that's so cute! There were some misplaced words, but that might just be because I'm not Canadian and I don't know how words are spelled over there. In need of a little editing, but the actual story is pretty damn good. And it's so cute! A little cheesy maybe, but SO FRIGGIN CUTE!

Ahem, sorry. But it's true.

-SapphireIris

I LOVE YOU!you completely ripped on the annoying cliche crap YOU ARE AMAZING

I loved this story it was awesome i can realate to so many of the themes in this story Kaida's love and her heartbreak when she loses Drake. The lost feeling when going to a new place. It was such a well write story that it made me remember all of those things with such vividness.

That was quite a tear jerker, any chance of a sequel?This goes in to mylist of favourite stories.I can't believe it's over.