Reviews for pomegranate
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
amazing, short, piece.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Your endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant.
eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Short but perfect, beautiful work
in tesseraction chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
short-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this.
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
i love the second stanza.

and i can relate to the first.

lovely and sweet.
rentingprices chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
It depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery fuck of what they're about ( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (:
having reached closure chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
m rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)


flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Wow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.

Tyndall Blue chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
m tragic cigarettes
always gats b y chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
gorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice.
bread and circuses chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
the images... so blissful. so perfect.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
you write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
i love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually.
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