|Reviews for pomegranate|
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
amazing, short, piece.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Your endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant.
| eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Short but perfect, beautiful work
| in tesseraction chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
short-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this.
| crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
i love the second stanza.
and i can relate to the first.
lovely and sweet.
| Retailprice chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
It depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery fuck of what they're about ( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (:
| having reached closure chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
m rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)
| flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Wow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.
| Tyndall Blue chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
m tragic cigarettes
| always gats b y chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
gorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice.
| bread and circuses chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
the images... so blissful. so perfect.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
you write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
i love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually.