Hooray for scenery. I loved this poem.

childen are fountains of unknown wisdom

i miss the innocence

beautiful peom, beautiful lessons

This has a nostalgic tone that enhances the images in this work. The personalization helped to carry the narrative as it made it truly relatable as an every kids story, but unique in the same breath. Good write.

beautiful...I love this poem, especially the way you used little kids games to reveal larger truths about life. Well done!~arwenwasframed~

interesting~ reminds me of childhood... good poem

keep writing!