-Having always been a fan a tedious, brainless work,- *of

-I want to be a surgen.- *surgeon

This is kinda... really sad. It's disillusionment and loss, veiled with pretended optimism. The last stanza struck me especially. I can't imagine wanting to leave my kids for anything- if I had kids, that is. And the final line is really cool.

I LOVE the title! I think a lot of young girls can really relate to this as well...wanting a career, not necessarily knowing what career, but wanting to be a mom too...and those who have been honest with themselves and thought about it have come up against the same conclusion...I like it! Again, your use of italics distracts me but it was a negligible distraction in this piece...

I love the sarcasm in this. And the third stanza made me laugh. Keep it up.

Wow. I loved this piece! And the way you mention a new career, yet there is always a catch, there is always something to it. I love it1 It's the subtle glint in the eye, this poem. Amaizing...and the end, when you bring it all together...lovely! I am breathless. Keep writing!xo - Acrobia

hm i dunno about your note...i didnt think this was so bad at all...conveys a good idea...nice images...i like it anyways...keep up the good work MLF sorry it took so long to send a review your way

This was really interesting to read. No, it wasn't moving, but I liked it.

Btw, thanks for the review on my story. Wish there was a reply button for FictionPress like they have for , lol. _

i love this. very thought provoking and original. great job! :D

interesting~ i found this quite original and in a way thought provoking~ good work

keep writing~

An unusually sad/tender piece. My honest congratulations go to you.

Thanx for reviewing my stuff.

I am really looking forward to having enough time to read more of your material.

This has a wonderfully open feel to it. The possibilities and the satisfaction of what one already is. You portray an excellent depth in this of the openended possibilities that are available. Good write.

I really like this piece.

I really like this idea. Very nice work. :]

Oh, I love it! *Especially* the last line. Very sad and... yay! Awesome! I'd give you some critique if I knew the first thing about how to write poetry well. :P

interesting worry, muses come and go, i think i found another the other day.

The poem developed in an interesting way, talking about the girl's possible future avenues...the end really didn't make sense to me though. It came out of nowhere and was too vague to contribute to the poem. Might just be me, though. I liked it up until the end