Reviews for The promise
pinkfairydust chapter 4 . 6/2/2006
it's fantastic but a lot of grammatical errors! lol please keep updating!
Kodachii chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
I like the atmosphere, it was pretty good. Sounds like the beginning of a good story.
iknowthethirdthingaboutpoetry chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Well, uh, at least I won't be telling you to fix your grammar and spelling. However:

1) This is a tad bit insubstantial. Too many kisses make a potentially good story cheap.

2) Is Spanish your native tongue? Try to use the quotation marks for dialogues when you write in English instead of those itsy-bitsy dashes.