This is beautiful, sad but very beautiful. Thank you!

Omg so cheesy yet so cute!

Love it! I cry a lot reading about Aidan!
Regards,
Diane.

Omg 1 thousand words plus and you had me crying. Damn that was not cool. NOT COOL.

STILL. This is such a beautiful story but I hateeeeeeeeee the fact that he died DUH but still, its gives a very beautiful sad feel to it

I love how Aidan's character had a quiet beauty to it and how he was so...grey

heart this story!

awww D:

If he was so happy, why would he commit suicide?

And the question everyone is dying to know. "Why"

So bittersweet. But we all knew what we were getting ourselves into when we selected a story with tragedy as a genre.

I love it. My sister loves it.

Heart-wrenching and beautiful. So honest and true to the tragedy itself...

And the question will always remain... "Why"

-iCY-

Awhhh oh my gosh. Tears in myeyes

I confess my love towards the guy i adored so much 2 years rejects me but i didn't mind because we never know when we gonna die and I don't want to be the person who'll regret my whole life for not telling how I felt towards him :)

really nice story _

i didn't find this as a cliche and cheesy romance story. I found this to be fairly sad and maybe that's why I liked it :)

Cheesy? I suppose you could call it that...

But it is a change from the regular feel good/fluffy ONE-SHOTS so commenly found on fp. I was kinda hoping for one of those :)

It's well writen though, melencholic, but I enjoyed it. The twist was unexpected for me at least, which was refreshing.

I hope you keep up the writing, Take Care

~Lara~

erm.. im disappointed..

it started great.. it seems like it gonna be a great story..

than it ended that way...

and i didnt even know why he did it...

the lesson was great though..and i don't think it was cheesy..

Ohmygod why!WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?THE STORY'S SO PERFECT.

Why you kill him?

o my god! crying now.