no i liked it but hell you could've let him live you now make me want to hit you and i actually hoped there would be more to this story but now i know that there will never be another part to this specific story... how forsaken is me?

woahh really good fic! i luved itsoo sad he committed suicide:(

I could picture it amazingly well. It's incredibly sad.

Aww, that's cute. But I wish he hadn't comitted suicide..

i really like this. how is this a rip-off?

This was very sweet and nice. Only a bit sad, but I happen to like stories that have a realistic ending or are realistic. Though I wish you would have put why he commtted suicide. Then again, it's a short and not every little detail has to be put into it.

Well, I was hoping for a happy story when I started reading this. You know, one that might not be too realistic, but would brighten my day. This wasn't that fluff, but I'm still glad I read it. You did a beautiful job with it, and conveyed a strong message.

Wow. Really, wow. This was very very well written, and very moving... wow. :)

I LOVE IT! It so sad and moving... loved it!

Wow, that's so sad! Especially when you see that he wanted exactly the same thing that she did, but she didn't realize it until it was too late. The end does have a good message, though, that you should do what you can today, cause you never know what tomorrow will bring.

I really like this story, it's very good. It was kind of cheesy how you wrote in his journal exactly how she was feeling, but I think that was good too. Good job!

Hm, all and all it was rather good, but I think that the part where Aidans's mother comes into the coffee house to tell her that he's committed suicide might be a little streched. Anyway, it was very good, even though I wish we could have known why he killed himself.

Oh man...i got the coldest chills all over at the end of that. ah, im still having them. wow. i don't know what to say. that is beyond tragic. but you wrote it SO WELL. that's what i loved so much, cause this could have turned out rather maudlin, but it didn't. you're getting the deluxe treatment my friend: going on my fave stories list, authors list, and my author alert. lots and lots of applause for you.

Omg, that was the most beautiful one shot i have ever read! Maybe even better than His Phenomenal Eyes.

The reason i love one-shots is because they usually have the most interesting plots and if something bad happens to the characters, i'm not really that attached so it isn't as sad or heartbreaking. But my God, I cried. I never cry on one-shots. I can't explain it but i'm addicted to these characters as crazy as it sounds in such a short period of time.

Please, you should definately write more one-shots or a fic or something. I need more of your work! Lol.

-Lauren

p.s. I'll be checking up on you...not in a crazy stalkerish way or anything...-nervous chuckle-

:D

That was the most beautifully sad story I have ever read. I almost cried. In public. Wow. You have an amazing talent for short stories. There was no unnecessary information and it didn't leave the reader wanting more that what the story offered. It was perfect. Beautiful.