Good flow and meaning, it's awesome that you can write something purdy darn good in just ten minutes.

I like your poems You are good. Sorry my englich are not verry good. tank you to review my poem

I'll warm you with my breath/before you may freeze to death. It seems like maybe love can turn you cold or make you a warmer and more loving person. SO there are two extremes to the spectrum. The moral seems to be that even if you were hurt before, you have to keep trying until you find The One. Nice! _

Thanks for your review. As for your poem, it's sweet. As in the 'it's better to have loved and lost' sense, if you can make sense of that. Because that's the feeling I get from reading this. It's better to have loved and lost, because then you're more prone to love again than if you never had... I dunno, but that's what this poem made me think of, so good job.

L. Kantenseter