|Reviews for The Reconciliation of George W Bush|
| Mr. Dan Bayfield chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
OK, to be honest I found the last line a bit confusing. Was the poem, overall, criticizing or praising the President? The poem was good, but the ending felt sort of flat to me.
| ii chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
This doesn't work as a poem. It feels like you took prose, split it into short lines, and called it a poem. I see that you repeated lines, but there's no other evidence. Maybe if you put it in a form, added some rhythm, rhyme, or alliteration, it would sound more like a poem. But now, it just doesn't work.