Reviews for The Thin Line Between Longing and Desperation
Rozlin chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
that was beautiful! sorry i haven't talked to you in so long... i don't have internet at my new house but i try to get on when i can. hope you didn't think i'd stopped loving you! cuz i still do! write me!

-RozlinP.S. I'm engaged!
Plinky chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Aww, so beautiful. "Personified ecstasy" That's lovely.

Lovely ending too. Gorgeous poem. Keep writing!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
very emotional i liked the last two lines the most, really brought a sense of understanding and impact good work

keep writing!
Shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Beautiful...
tearsofonyxroses chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
i love it...i can picture what your saying...
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
So beautiful written. Yuu always had a knack for writing beautiful things though expressing your feelings in words. An excellent piece of work.
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I love happy, Adam. SO MUCH! His poems' greatness don't change with his moods.