Damn! this one got me teary-eyed. And Dane is going the next day. Although I know you usually write short stories, I wish this story is longer. well, I'll be making up the continuation of this story in my head anyway..

im seriously hoping you write a second part to this story, a happier one it was so sad T_T

Oh, that's sad. It's an interesting ending, not finished, but it's very good that way. Of course, if you updated it I would be very happy; I loved that use of imagery: beautiful

ahh. another heartbreaking one X oh i just can't imagine how pretty Dane must be. . the gold imagery drives my a little crazy, blue eyes :D but I sort of guessed that the girl was Dane right from the start... heehee. dead giveaway, but still sweet, cos Relic seems like such a blur person not to realize it. X pretty! happy valentines

now what is anteros? once again, your command of the language is doubt i feel a little uneasy abt the type of romance u're writing abt but it's still beautifully written. reminded me of this slim young man who came into the shop earlier today and asked for a dress tt he could wear for a performance..i was momentarily loss for words as i have never pick a dress for a guy to wear. , the dresses u wrote abt sound really pretty. draw them out, keep them..find ur manufacturer and mayb u can open a shop tt's more successful than mna. LOL.

Very interesting, well told story. Good pace, moved along, but didn't seem too rushed. Very good description, and I liked the characters.I was wondering if you'd review my story The Stones and offer a few suggestions.