|Reviews for disillusion|
| fishslappinghighlandflinger chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Wow! This is really good. I love the way it flows and how the bitterness seems to seep through every word. Wonderful!
Stan the Nerd
| arohalove chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
"good enough to borrow, read, and throw carelessly
back on the shelf, with dirtyfumblinggroping
(hands) fingerprints, but
buying’s something else"
I love the whole thing but this is my favorite part. Perfect words.
| Ellie101 chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
An *awesome* poem! (The first paragraph's my absolute favorite.) :P
| sweetest tangerine chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
oh man, i really liked this. you're amazing with words. it took a couple reads but it's great really.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
holyshit. how could i have not found you before? this is so brilliant. i'm reading more.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
i love to hate valentine's day, and you tell it so well.
| Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Brilliantly writen. I love the use of parenthesis and the lack of capitalization.
Also, thank you for the comment. I appreciate being told what I can do better.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
"i used to think that special actually had meaning/naïveté buried under barbed wire and razor knives/choking on the dishonesty you fe(e)d me. it used to taste/like honey, with just a hint of wicked sin"
very powerful lines. i love it.