Reviews for disillusion
fishslappinghighlandflinger chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
Wow! This is really good. I love the way it flows and how the bitterness seems to seep through every word. Wonderful!

Stan the Nerd
arohalove chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
"good enough to borrow, read, and throw carelessly

back on the shelf, with dirtyfumblinggroping

(hands) fingerprints, but

buying’s something else"

I love the whole thing but this is my favorite part. Perfect words.
Ellie101 chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
An *awesome* poem! (The first paragraph's my absolute favorite.) :P
sweetest tangerine chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
oh man, i really liked this. you're amazing with words. it took a couple reads but it's great really.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
holyshit. how could i have not found you before? this is so brilliant. i'm reading more.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
i love to hate valentine's day, and you tell it so well.

* noelle
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Brilliantly writen. I love the use of parenthesis and the lack of capitalization.

Also, thank you for the comment. I appreciate being told what I can do better.
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
"i used to think that special actually had meaning/naïveté buried under barbed wire and razor knives/choking on the dishonesty you fe(e)d me. it used to taste/like honey, with just a hint of wicked sin"

very powerful lines. i love it.