Hi, me again )Okay, time to get cracking...Your poem is very expressive, right off the top (goosebump factor 9.5/10)makes lots of sense and got me thinking, which is good )One thing that I found 'iffy' with the poem was the reference to the kiss. true, it is poetry, but still, you should refer a little bit to why the kiss is a symbol of a "fragile hope, that...remain together, eternally".Overall, I like it alot. Very different from my style of poetry, or my usual style anyways. If u want, ask me for a sample )Overall, a good poem, thanks for sharing it with me )

so true- kisses are much better- last for much longer