|Reviews for sleeping pills and grunts|
| Shet Lloyd chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
I love your characters in this. They seem real in the way that humans are never really any extreme; they're just there and... I don't know. I don't know what I'm talking about. Anyway, yeah. I thought your characterization was especially interesting. You should try your hand at prose.
| emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
this is wonderful! it rather reminds of me warren schmidt and his wife, although with a gender reversal. although generally mean who do themselves too well on the starchy foods are genial blokes.
| acid-tears chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
This is terribly sad, but very well written. I love the flow, and the run-on lines. thanks also for the review :)