Reviews for Again: An Innocent Act
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
"but your dumb and clueless," "your" should be "you're"

"Your cute and innocent, thanks for the information.”" "Your" should be "You're"

"that my naive, innocence act is who i really am." Capitalize the "i"

Oh, very chilling; wonderful job.
lily chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
interesting...and yet intriguing