Reviews for Learning to Live Again
1ponyprince chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
I think that this is a good poem, check Surprise_- 8th line, I think it needs to be Surprised.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
You teach her how to live in this world.
llaulli chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
o me gusto
fallingstars97 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
i like it ur really good!
castaway on a lonely day chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
It's just perfect! ;)) you write like a professional! ;PP ;)) how old are you? ;))
Emerald Amber chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
It's a lovely poem... keep writing stuff like this.
VioletMeloncholia chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
This is pretty good. I can empathize with the loneliness of the girl, as I pretty much experience this when I go to school, and I can see the mom's need to help her. This is sweet.
lili999 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
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V-Sleeplessinwisconsin chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
nice v. nice
running-in-the-rain chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Mogey089 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
I like your poem! I have one about love.
Erma Buckles chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
A nice poem. There are a few gramar mess-ps that distracted me from reading it. Fix those and your golden.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
this is lovely. i really like it! i love the mysteriousness of it, sort of intriguing but relatable. does that make sense? anyway, great work!
hope chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
wow! dynamic...i wonder what really is going on here!