Reviews for Untitled Three
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
You have great potential as a writer, and I can't believe that you have so few reviews. Bah! Don't expect much from the world. But more importantly, don't let that hold you back.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
I think you could name it something like...

Height Of Your Pain

Beg

Hear You Plead

Want To Hear You Scream

I love it though, but I think you should try to put a name to the poem.

Great Job!

Rock Out!