Reviews for Wall You In
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
Oh my god. Ping? ping? That word alone hits the reader so hard. I just might stick one in randomly into a poem now, haha. Great job with this, the imagery is subtle and stunning.
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
This is my favorite line:

And hear it hit—ping—

the metallic clink, of a link of my love.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
This creates such vividly haunting images. Kind of like you guide the reader step by step through this. Very well written.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Wow. That's some powerfully possessive love. Lovely stuff created with sentence fragments. "And something bites./Your fear." is probably my favorite part. So wonderfully ruthless. Yum.