Can't wait till the next on! I love your story!

yay new chapter! i loved it and eagerly await more :)

*raises hand* soon!

amazing chapter...so sad, but still amazing!

i just finished reading but there are two different parts of me screaming- 1) to kill u lol for leaving such a cliffhanger and 2) not to kill u coz then u couldn't write the next chapter!

anyways, loved it!

Hey. Uh.. Hookers don't get that much money you know, The average price for a blow job is actually 20$. so... yeah. That's all I got to say, otherwise, it's a good story...

YAY! AN UPDATE! And an awesome Twist! Great Chapter, I can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work babe.

Please Please update! This chapter was really well written!

Hey Biotch you know I love your shit. I loved your beginning it was great; it really brought me into the world of being a hooker, and damn you know it well for being the lover of one man for three years! haha, but anyway I guess when I got to the sam part I was thinking eh I couldn't imagine you and my brother being all mushy and I went whiz all over that part. But I know if I didn't know Sam personally I would have found it romantic, but yeah, sam being lovey with my best friend total story killer.

wow thats so sad but u got a good story good luck keep writing

oh...it's getting good. i really liked some of the syntax in this chapter.

it didn't suck, although it was a bit short for my taste. yay vampires! i am really pleased with the progress that you've been making with this little story. please continue with it and i will continue to heap my lavish praises on you (much desreved too). nice work!

~FyreFaerie

u couldve been a bit more detailed witht he descirption of what happened with isabella but other than that twas good

This is very well written i dopnt think you need any pointers! LOL but yes this chapter was very intresting! WHERE DOES HE GO? you made it sound like somehting big is going to happen! i can't wait! pleasse update as fast as you just updated.!

You've done a good job of keeping chapters near realism for the last few chapters. Kudos. Just... the whole bit with Isaac? His speech is a bit too rigid, a bit too personal with Angel. Like he wants to be her father or something in those lines. It feels a bit wooden, because the words he uses are too politically correct. Also, Angel, Starlight, Leon and all the prostitutes speak the same way, even though they're obviously street-savvy. Giving your characters a bit of slang and less 'fancy' words, will definately bring a sense of reality to the picture. Good storyline though, and I'll definately read on.