Well it has been along time for us... I mean I have not been on here and now I never talk to you and you never talk to me. Once in a while there is a slight conversation but nothing big... For all its worth I will always love you and i am sorry for everthing!

This is really sweet and its a wonderful feeling you feel right now, it's great that you're feeling this way. I like the poem, the honesty makes it a masterful piece, even in free verse.

aw! really nice. well written and expressed. i loved the part about putting words on paper. it was lovely. one thing i will say is that i think "Especially when I feel it so strongly, clearly inside" would read better without the double adverb. one less syllable or something. i might suggest "so strong and clear inside" but you are the author. take my advice or leave it. *smiles* thank you-kae