Reviews for One So Young
Fate Defied chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
dark but very good in my opinion. "Silently, I bear their pain/ Their tormented cries scorch my soul/ How much more must I endure?" my favorite part. i can see what this is about, and i say you did a fine job. keep it up.

shadow
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
loved it! muffled minds is a brilliant little piece. cheers!