|Reviews for Jam|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow. This is wonderful and sharp and most excellent. The last stanza and the final line really ties it together and brings it all home.
| are you from mejico chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Man. that said a lot in a cutesy words. Much feeling. Nice poem.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
This is wonderfully well crafted. I like how you use the concrete images to portray the abstract feelings. great conceptualization. Good write.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
The last line was a funny play on words. Lovely and bitter. It seems like the narrator grew into being alone... Pretty melancholy. Nice.