Reviews for Jam
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow. This is wonderful and sharp and most excellent. The last stanza and the final line really ties it together and brings it all home.
are you from mejico chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Man. that said a lot in a cutesy words. Much feeling. Nice poem.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
This is wonderfully well crafted. I like how you use the concrete images to portray the abstract feelings. great conceptualization. Good write.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
The last line was a funny play on words. Lovely and bitter. It seems like the narrator grew into being alone... Pretty melancholy. Nice.