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Enough f-bombs for WW3.

0_0... well now...

... oh this'll be a fun read.

O.O... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Why... idc if it's your story! Whyyyyyy?! Damn you freedom of choice!

O.O ... Oh... Oh my... Um. To read on, or NOT to read on. That is the question. If there's a m/m scene I think at Aubrey should've been the 'pitcher' instead if the 'catcher' . Kinda brings down his masculinity. Hmmm... If I were Kim and I knew about this, I wouldn't be able to take Aubrey seriously anymore. ANYWAY... Read on I shall!

It's romantic, in a sadistic kind of way. I like it :)

spacing would help..
feels like reading a very long essay that has no paragraph spacing... But none the less, this is awesome..

I'm going to have to agree with the others, that ws the most ridiculous ending I have read in a long time. This story is posted under romance not angst or the likes. Sad ending are okay but they have to "fit" with the story and usually there is a point to an unhappy ending this one just didn't make any sense.

The plot of the story was good and it really could become a great story with some changes :)

At first I was obsessed now im just like MAD. This is ended horribly why must you put a depressing ending like that? D; I knew this was too good to be true ..

You killed her? Well, that's a shame. It looked like it had such a nice plot, too. That's why I read the ending first. But I have to say that I am thoroughly disappointed. Why must all the good stories have shitty endings?

- Tatiana, the extremely critical story critic

Speechless...

i'm so confused,, interesting though so Kim's new mate is in a gay vampire relationship with this Resolute i see i'm still confused maybe i'll get it in a few chapters :)